Me and my friend (who are doing animation too!) discussed how we can improve our film.  Nothing was much discuss  about mine.  They pretty much said to stick at it.
 
 
After spend quite a while working on my idea and pitch, we had to present my idea to my tutor.  Sadly, it was not as successful as I thought it would be.  But at least I had a presentation and my tutors had enough to discuss!

They told that my style did not suite my film, it was too "cartoon network", that I need to make the Roberta (the fantasy one) more abstract.  But I doubt I would do change it.  I have been developing this style and I want Roberta's characterization to be subtle.